...historically your productions haven't been [interesting]...
Bold words from a guy who talks over Tarot card readers.
Here's some honest feedback for you: those who try to get through the first couple minutes of your show are turned off by the
talking over a Tarot re-stream idea. I have it on good authority, from multiple, genuine sources, that it bores a wide swath of listeners.
Also, your show is
heavily lacking in subject matter. You claim to be a sorcerer-- Why not discuss magic? The occult? Dip in to the wide array of autobiographical, slice-of-life paranormal experiences, which I
know you've had. Solid monologues of what you
know-- Or even a guest well-versed in topics around the parapolitical now and then.
You're
good with a guest. Whether it was you and I having conversations in the past, or that appearance you made with, say, 'Irish Demon' for instance. Another individual to spar with intellectually is something you do well.
How is that different to talking over Tarot card readers? Its more intimate, and there's less of a gulf between your audio levels and theirs. Talking to someone who isn't there, but rather is being re-transmitted over speakers while you yell over it and interject without stopping or starting the audio sounds shit.
You're very much up on conspiracy theory. Perhaps do a deep dive on some of those theories...just,
anything that isn't you interrupting yourself every few seconds without finishing a thought.
If you want to do drama, do drama and name names. Don't be so vague that people are left wondering who and what you're referring to. Say what you say, do what you do and OWN it.
Non-sequiturs have their place, sure. But Jack, maybe a bit of show prep or research before hitting record will go a long way.
You lack structure. And, look ... I
get it. Your lifestyle isn't one in which you need to adhere to a set routine, aside from doing what you want on a whim. At least, that's what you've led us to believe, anyway.
But sometimes setting oneself some constraints to work within can be helpful. That way you need not be inspired to plough ahead.
And, look, your output is admirable. You're pumping stuff out at a quicker pace than most. But I can't help but feel that is because the content itself is somewhat hollow.
I'm not suggesting you pander to a particular demographic. Nor am I saying that you should venture too far from what it is that excites you as an artist. I'm just saying you have a lot of potential. And I'm encouraging you not to piss it away. Use it!
And your audience will flourish.
